Volume One: The Blacktower Heir

Ch. 003| The Gates of Graycrown

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A guarded gate, a bronze token, and a pull toward the tower.

Crimson Ring Year 1218, Solstice Month, the nineteenth day, the Hour of the Pig.

Three men and three horses came down the ridge, rode two watches, and reached a small town called Poplar Town.

Poplar Town lay outside the dynasty's establishment — the last village south of Graycrown that no one cared to govern; farther north began Graycrown's own official suburbs. The dynasty had never set a boundary stone here, and the houses did not turn their wagons in. Most of the townsfolk were discharged Border Army men, or road merchants who had nowhere to go once they retired. When Raymond entered the town, a few old men on the street nodded to him and said nothing, as though they knew him but none would come forward.

"They don't greet you," Roen said.

"I'm not one of their people here," Raymond said. "They know it."

Raymond chose an inn that hung a peeling wooden sign, two characters written on it in bronze ink: "Poplar." The innkeeper was past sixty, the lid of his left eye drooping to cover half the eyeball. He looked at Raymond once, took the key down from the wall and pushed it across the wooden table, not asking for a name.

"Last room," the innkeeper said. "Someone's leaving early tomorrow. Don't be in their way."

Raymond nodded and set the silver on the table. Three silver coins minted by House Whitescript — their faces stamped with House Whitescript's silver-sand pattern. Roen noticed the coins were thinner than the silver of the Northern exile grounds, the lines finer. The Northern exile grounds used the dynasty's old silver; near the capital they used the new mint House Whitescript had struck within the last thirty years — and Raymond did not explain why he had the new silver on him.

The nameless soldier went to see to the horses. Raymond and Roen went upstairs.


The room was at the far back of the second floor, the window facing north — away from Graycrown, where the city could not be seen. Inside were only two wooden cots and a small table. In the stove was half a length of unburnt charcoal, as though just put out by the last guest.

Raymond set the saddlebag on the small table, took from it the cloak with the bronze-wax dark pattern, and laid it out on a cot.

"When we enter the city tomorrow, you wear this," Raymond said.

Roen reached out and felt the hem of the cloak. The bronze wax ground into the cloth — so fine it showed only under firelight slanting across it, as though someone had run a very fine needle once along the warp and weft of the cloth. In eleven years in the Border Army he had not seen this craft.

"Why?" Roen said.

Raymond sat on the edge of the cot, laid the shortsword across his knees, and began to check the binding-straps of the scabbard. He did not look up.

"The South Gate of Graycrown has an old custom for those passing through on a recall writ," Raymond said. "Those recalled back have to wear the garb marked with three-house attestation — the bronze-wax dark pattern is one version of it. Without it, the guards can't tell which side recalled you, and the process jams at the gate. With it, the guards know you're under three-house attestation, and they can't stop you."

"And if they stop me?"

Raymond drew the scabbard's straps tight and looked up.

"If they stop you, the house that stops you is declaring war on the other two," he said. "The guards won't make that trouble for themselves."

Roen understood half of it. He tried to work out the other half — why had Raymond not handed him the cloak the day the recall writ arrived? Why wait the full twelve days? Why in Poplar Town, and not in the North?

"This cloak," Roen said, "isn't to be worn by me."

Raymond did not answer. He set the shortsword back at his side.

"It's to be worn by you," Roen went on. "I wear this into the city, and what the gate sees is 'the man recalled under three-house attestation has an escort.' Without it, what they see is 'a Border Army captain bringing a man of unknown identity into the capital.' With it, you get through. Without it, you don't."

Raymond looked at Roen for about two breaths. Then he took a piece of dry ration from his pocket, tore it open, and bit into it.

"You guess better than you did at seven," Raymond said. "But you've guessed half of it right."

"And the other half?"

"The other half's not the time yet," Raymond said. "Sleep."

Roen did not press. Asked now, Raymond would not say. He folded the cloak and laid it at the head of the cot. The brass clasp in the inner pocket at his chest was still moving — but unlike the day before, that "moving" was beginning to have a direction, as though some place were drawing it lightly. He did not tell Raymond.

He slept three watches.


The twentieth day, the Hour of the Rabbit.

Raymond kicked the stove apart and pushed the window open. In the Solstice Month dawn, grey-white mist climbed up from the low ground beyond the window, reached the inn's windowsill, and stopped there, coming no farther in.

Roen put on the cloak with the bronze-wax dark pattern. The cloth was heavier than he had thought, not from thickness — from the bronze wax having pressed the fibers of the cloth firm. Worn on the body, lying against the shoulders, it was like wearing a very thin mail.

Raymond looked at him once, said nothing, and walked out of the room.

The nameless soldier waited below. The horses were already readied.

Three men and three horses left Poplar Town and rode along the road toward Graycrown.

Less than half a watch on, people began to appear along both sides of the road.

Not caravans, not Border Army. The folk on the road were a mixed lot — peddlers shouldering carrying-poles, pilgrims leading donkeys, travelers on foot. Half a watch more, and the crowd compressed in density, and wagons began to appear.

The wagons bore house crests.

Roen saw house crests up close for the first time. The first to pass them was a small wagon with an ebony body, a pattern of two interlocked rings cut into the door — House Vowkey. The wagon swept past them, and the one inside did not lift the curtain. The second, a silver-sand body, a dune pattern on the door — House Whitescript. The third, a black body, no crest on the door.

Raymond watched the third black wagon for several breaths, then drew his gaze back.

"That was—" Roen said.

"I don't know whose it is," Raymond said. "But a wagon with no crest isn't a wagon with no one in it — it's one that doesn't want to be seen."

Roen committed it to memory.

The clasp at his chest — as the road ran north, that "sense of direction" grew clearer. As though someone had buried a very fine thread in his chest, tied to some place not yet in sight and pulling lightly. Roen noticed that the direction of the pull lined up, roughly, with the tower's crown at the center of the capital.

He did not tell Raymond.


The South Gate of Graycrown, the end of the Hour of the Dragon.

The South Gate was a grey-white arch of stone, only its outline visible from afar. A line of small characters was cut into the lintel, too far off to read. Six guards stood on either side of the gateway, in deep-red cloaks, the hems running with a very faint dark pattern shot through with flame.

"House Bloodflame," Raymond said in a low voice. "The South Gate is House Bloodflame's to keep."

"Each of the Seven Great Houses keeps a gate?" Roen asked.

"Seven gates to seven houses," Raymond said. "The South Gate is House Bloodflame's. The other six you'll see in time, once you're in the city."

Roen did not press. He knew Raymond would not finish reciting that whole table on the road outside the city.

Roen committed it to memory.

The line of those entering the city split into three — the leftmost the merchants' line (those with trade tokens), the middle the pilgrims' line, the rightmost the line for sundries. None of the three lines was short. The merchants' moved fastest, the pilgrims' next, the sundries' slowest.

Raymond led the three of them to the end of the sundries' line.

"We're not sundries," Roen said.

"We're not merchants either, and not pilgrims," Raymond said. "The sundries' line has people the guards can't make out — we're the kind they can't make out."

The sundries' line was some eighty-odd people. Standing in it, Roen had time to study the South Gate slowly.

The line of small characters above the gateway came clear up close — it was the first line of the dynasty's founding oath, cut into the stone, the writing already worn away by the wind for the better part. Roen knew only the first two characters: "Crimson Ring." The rest he could not fully make out.

The sundries' line moved very slowly — the guards did not only inspect the entry documents, they also touched a small metal rod lightly to the chest of each comer, listening for some sound. Roen watched a while before he made it out: it was a civilian version of House Bloodflame's cursed-blood sensor rod, used to test whether a comer carried any unregistered breath of cursed blood. Among those in line ahead, several were touched and the sensor rod gave no response — the guards waved them through. One young woman was touched, and the sensor rod trembled faintly; the guard at once pulled her aside and called his deputy over.

Roen watched the woman. Her color changed, but she did not struggle — she was waiting for something. After about the time it takes to drink a cup of tea, a woman guard in light-red officials' dress came, said a few words to her, checked her entry documents, touched her once more with the sensor rod — this time no response — and then let her go.

"Those with a house bloodline gone astray have to be registered before they can enter," Raymond said in a low voice. "Unregistered, the sensor rod sounds, and you don't get in."

Roen glanced down at his own chest. The cloak covered it, the clasp inside, still moving. He wondered whether the sensor rod would respond to him.


By the time it came to them, the better part of the Hour of the Dragon had passed.

Raymond stepped up first and spread the recall writ on the guards' table.

The guard — a man a little past thirty, in House Bloodflame's deep-red cloak — gave it a glance.

He froze a moment.

That was not fright — it was the freeze of an administrative process suddenly broken off. His fingers stopped on the wax seal, neither breaking it nor pushing it back. He raised his head, looked at Raymond once, then at Roen, then at the cloak with the bronze-wax dark pattern.

Then he lowered his head and said something, in a dialect Roen could not follow, to the deputy beside him. The deputy at once turned and ran into a small stone hut beside the gateway.

The guard raised his head and said to Raymond: "Wait."

Raymond nodded, and did not take the recall writ back. The wax of the three-house attestation lay there on the guards' table, where anyone passing could see it — but Raymond did not move to cover it, and the guard did not cover it either. Roen understood — the wax of three-house attestation was a sign that said, "let everyone come and look."

As Roen waited, the clasp's pulling grew a touch stronger.

The clasp did not "grow warm," and the frequency did not change. It was that the unseen thread drew a touch straighter. The direction had not changed — still the direction of the tower's crown at the center of the city.


What the deputy brought back was an officer a little past forty, in a cloak one shade deeper than the guards', the collar embroidered with a small combined house-crest figure. Roen could not make the figure out fully; he recognized only one stretch of House Bloodflame's flame pattern, pieced together with two other houses. The whole sundries' line went quiet a beat as the officer walked over.

The officer did not look at Roen; he looked at Raymond first.

"You're Raymond?" the officer said.

"I am."

"Northern Border-Army Exile Grounds, captain of the third row of tents, number R-247."

"I am."

The officer looked at the recall writ, looked at the three layers of wax, saw that the innermost layer, House Vowkey's red-copper-and-blood seal-wax, had been broken, and gave a single nod. Then he walked into the small stone hut beside the gateway, and after about two cups of tea walked out, a small bronze token now in his hand.

The token was not large, a palm long and half a palm wide, the bronze face polished bright. On the front were cut four characters:

Admitted by Royal Decree

Below the characters was a very small pieced-together house-crest figure — the same figure as on the officer's collar, but smaller, cut finer.

The officer handed the token to Raymond, not to Roen.

"Seven days' force," the officer said. "Within seven days, the recipient must formally report to Blacktower Academy. Past the term, the issuing office takes it back — the old custom of three-house attestation you know better than I do."

Raymond took the token, gave it a glance, and reached over to tuck it into the inner pocket of Roen's cloak.

Not for Roen to take himself. Raymond formally handing it over.

Roen could feel the weight of the bronze token pressing in his inner pocket, against the parchment, against the clasp.

The officer stepped back and waved them through.

"Pass."


Three men and three horses rode in through the South Gate of Graycrown.

Under the gateway, Roen looked up, once, at the line of founding oath worn nearly past reading by the wind. The first line he had already seen. The rest — passing under the gateway, he looked up at it once.

Of the second line he knew six characters: "Seven rings stand together; the kingly way."

The rest he could not make out.

Within the gateway lay Graycrown.

The streets were wide, paved in stone, the buildings on either side four or five stories high, the roofs all of grey tile. No house colors. From this color Roen understood for the first time where the name "Graycrown" came from — it was that the whole city itself was grey.

The density of people on the streets was greater than all the places he had seen in eleven years in the North put together. Lower servants in the colors of the various houses passed along both sides of the stone road, small noble wagons crossed the intersections, peddlers shouldered carrying-poles and cried their wares at the corners. The air held the smell of charcoal fire, the smell of spice, the smell of something else — like many kinds of smell pressed within the same walls, with no way to disperse.

Raymond would not let them stop.

"The Southern Suburb Waystation," Raymond said. "In the west of the city. We go register first, then talk."

The three rode west along South Gate Avenue. Passing the second intersection, Roen looked up and saw the Crimson Ring Crown on the tower's crown again.

With the distance closed, the Crown showed clearer — the very faint sheen on its surface, still there.

The clasp at his chest — in the moment he looked up at the Crown, grew warm, once.

The same warmth as on the ridge, directed, against his ribs.

But this time it lingered a little longer.

On the ridge it had been about one breath. This time, from his looking up to see the Crown, he had passed two street-lamps before the clasp's warmth ebbed. Three breaths, perhaps four.

Roen did not reach to touch it.

He lowered his head and rode on.

Raymond did not look back. The nameless soldier following behind did not look at Roen either.

At the third intersection they turned west. The Crown on the tower's crown was blocked by a four-story building, out of sight for the moment.

The clasp's warmth ebbed clean away.

What was left was only that unseen thread — that sense of direction — still pulling at him lightly, toward the center of the city, toward the place now blocked from sight by buildings.


【Ch. 003 End · Poplar Town → the South Gate of Graycrown → South Gate Avenue】

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